Question

【題目】假設你是李明，去年你家里來了一位交換生，你非常開心。請根據(jù)內(nèi)容要點，寫一封電子郵件給你的筆友Tony，和他分享你的快樂，告訴他你的變化。

內(nèi)容要點：

1. 你是家里的獨生子/女，一直覺得很孤獨；

2. 去年你家里來了一位交換生，你很開心；

3. 他/她非�；顫娍蓯�，興趣廣泛；

4. 你們一起生活、學習，你跟他她學會了很多東西，尤其是英語提高了很多；

5. 你對這段經(jīng)歷的感受……

參考詞匯： exchange student交換生，joy（n.）歡樂， on one’s own initiative主動地

寫作要求：

1. 不得使用真實姓名和學校名；

2. 包含以上所有要點，可適當增加細節(jié)，使內(nèi)容充實，行文連貫

3. 字跡工整，語言精練，表達準確，條理清楚

4. 詞數(shù)80-100。（書信的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)�！�

Dear Tony,

As you know, I’m the only child in my family,______________________________________________

Yours,

Li Ming

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Tony,

As you know, I’m the only child in my family, and I always feel lonely. Last year, an exchange student came to my family. His name is Tom. He brought me much joy and happiness. I didn’t feel lonely any more.

He is very active and lively, and has a wide range of interests. He likes playing football and does well in playing chess. We live and study together. I have learned a lot from him, he often helps me with my English on his own initiative, so I have improved my English a lot. What’s more , I have learned to share and look after my family.

I’m lucky and happy to have an exchange student. Looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours,

Li Ming

【解析】

試題先讀提示，要點與格式要弄清；時態(tài)語態(tài)要當心，前后呼應要一致，結(jié)構(gòu)搭配莫違背；文章寫好細檢查，點滴小錯別忽視。學生在明確目的和掌握要領后，要嚴格按照規(guī)定的時間去完成作文訓練任務。最后要檢查（1）要點是否齊全，有無遺漏。（2）內(nèi)容是否連貫，有無缺詞。（3）語法是否正確，人稱、時態(tài)、語態(tài)、名詞單復數(shù)等有無錯誤。（4）用詞是否得當，有無習語及固定搭配等方面的錯誤。