Question

【題目】假如你是James,以My Family為題寫一篇小短文，其中需說明James與其他人物的關(guān)系，詞數(shù)不少于50個(gè)。

Father: Tom doctor 39 Mother: Mary teacher 37 Sister: Alice student 6

Answer 1

【答案】

My Family

My name is James. This is my family. There are 4 people in my family. They are my father, my mother, my sister and I. My father is a doctor. He is 39 years old. He works in a hospital near my house. My mother is a teacher. She is 37 years old. She teaches math in a middle school. My sister's name is Alice. She is a primary school student. She is only 6 years old. My parents love me and my sister. I love my family very much.

【解析】

本題目的寫作要點(diǎn)是說清楚詹姆斯一家人之間的相互關(guān)系。詹姆斯家共有4口人。爸爸媽媽和他的妹妹愛麗絲。寫作時(shí)要從身份，年齡，職業(yè)這三個(gè)方面來寫。這是必寫的要點(diǎn)。另外，也可順理成章的增加一些別的句子，來增強(qiáng)全文的流暢度和可讀性。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】

本文的寫作層次分明，按照要點(diǎn)的類別來組織句子。每個(gè)家庭成員自成一個(gè)體系。從身份，職業(yè)，年齡三個(gè)角度分別闡述清楚。另外，文章之首還做了一些鋪墊，說明詹姆斯的家庭共有多少人，都是哪些成員。短文最后表述了詹姆斯的家庭成員之間互相關(guān)愛，家庭非常幸福。整篇短文讀起來非常流暢，是一篇上好的范文佳作。