Question

【題目】請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容提示，為學(xué)校英語與欄寫一篇短文，介紹發(fā)生在你班同學(xué)劉奧身上的一 件事。

(1)上周五放學(xué)后劉奧乘高鐵去北京，看到有一男子在高鐵上搶占一位女士的靠窗座 位而不坐自己的座位。

(2)劉奧勸說這位男子回到他自己的座位，但遭到了拒絕。

(3)乘客用手機(jī)拍了照片，發(fā)布到網(wǎng)上。

(4)老師知道后表揚(yáng)了劉奧，劉奧說制止這種不文明行為是他的職責(zé)。

(5)你覺得……

參考詞匯: 高鐵 high-speed train

搶占某人的靠窗座位 grab(grabbed, grabbing) someone's window seat

勸說某人做某事 persuade sb. to do sth.

不文明的uncivilized

要求：

(1). 詞數(shù)：80～100 個(gè)。

(2). 短文的題目和開頭已給出，丌計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

(3). 要點(diǎn)齊全，行文連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。

When Liu Ao took the high-speed train to Beijing after school last Friday,

Answer 1

【答案】When Liu Ao took thehigh-speed train to Beijing after school last Friday,he saw a man grabbing a woman’s window seat instead of sitting on his own. He tried to persuade the man to return to his seat, but the man refused. The passengers took photos on their mobile phones and posted them online.

The teacher praised Liu Ao when he knew it. Liu said it was his duty to stop such uncivilized behavior. I think we should learn from Liu Ao. When we meet some uncivilized acts in our life, we should stop them in time.

【解析】

這是一篇給材料作文，文中所給材料比較詳細(xì)；動(dòng)筆之前根據(jù)所給材料組織語言，確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)，這里用一般過去時(shí)態(tài)，人稱是第三人稱單數(shù)，注意內(nèi)容表達(dá)清楚，語法正確，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，不要出現(xiàn)單詞拼寫錯(cuò)誤。相信只要平時(shí)多積累，就能獲得滿意的作文。