Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

你的新朋友們想了解你的家鄉(xiāng)，請根據(jù)下面提示，以"My hometown"為題，寫一篇70詞左右的短文來介紹你的家鄉(xiāng)。要求包含所有要點(diǎn)，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，語句通順，書寫整潔。要點(diǎn)如下:

1.我的家鄉(xiāng)安靜而又現(xiàn)代化;

2.這里空氣清新，有湖泊和河流;

3.這里有很多事情可以做，例如……;

4.我認(rèn)為我的家鄉(xiāng)很宜居，我愛我的家鄉(xiāng)。

Answer 1

【答案】My hometown

I’d like to tell you something about my hometown. It is a small town near the city, and it is new , quiet and modern. It looks very beautiful with many trees and flowers in it. And the air here is clean and fresh. There is a lake in the town and also a river around the town. People can row a boat on the lake or the river. There are some large shopping malls in the centre of the town and people can buy anything they need. I think my hometown is a nice place to live. I love my hometown very much.

【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，以"My hometown"為題，寫一篇短文來介紹我的家鄉(xiāng)。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱為單數(shù)第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：I’d like to tell you……，It is……，And the air here is……，There is……，I think……，I love……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。