Question

【題目】英國(guó)的史密斯(Smith)先生和他的朋友打算明天游覽長(zhǎng)城。假如你是他們的導(dǎo)游，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示寫一篇英語(yǔ)短文，為此次導(dǎo)游任務(wù)做準(zhǔn)備。
提示：
①世界上最長(zhǎng)的城墻；
②約4～5米寬，最寬處可供五匹馬或十個(gè)人并行；
③2700多年前，古代皇帝為保衛(wèi)國(guó)家命人修建長(zhǎng)城，后秦始皇等命人修整。
要求：要點(diǎn)齊全，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，90詞左右。

Answer 1

【答案】One possible version：

The Great Wall is the longest wall in the world. There are no other man—made objects as big as it. It is about 4 to 5 meters wide .At the widest part, five horses or ten men can walk along it side by side.

It has a long history .Around 2,700 years ago, the ancient emperors made people build it to protect the country. Later Qin Shihuang and other emperors also made people repair it，

It’s a symbol of China and lots of tourists around the world visit it every year.

【解析】本題是一篇提綱性作文，寫做的是游長(zhǎng)城的筆記，在寫作時(shí)根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)，語(yǔ)態(tài)；語(yǔ)言表達(dá)要符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣。
寫作步驟：
一：閱讀提示，弄清所有信息，明確寫作要點(diǎn)。
1.世界上最長(zhǎng)的城墻： The Great Wall is the longest wall in the world. There are no other man—made objects as big as it.
2.約4～5米寬，最寬處可供五匹馬或十個(gè)人并行： It is about 4 to 5 meters wide .At the widest part, five horses or ten men can walk along it side by side.
3.2700多年前，古代皇帝為保衛(wèi)國(guó)家命人修建長(zhǎng)城，后秦始皇等命人修整： It has a long history .Around 2,700 years ago, the ancient emperors made people build it to protect the country. Later Qin Shihuang and other emperors also made people repair it，
4.它是中國(guó)的象征： It’s a symbol of China and lots of tourists around the world visit it every year.
二：根據(jù)要點(diǎn)，寫出關(guān)鍵詞，短語(yǔ)和句子。
三：組詞成句，連句成篇。注意使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。