Question

【題目】文段表達(dá)

根據(jù)中文和英文提示，用英文寫一封意思連貫、符合邏輯、不少于60詞的郵件。郵件的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。所給提示詞語僅供選用。請(qǐng)不要寫出你的校名和姓名。

假如你叫王輝 ，最近和你的美國(guó)朋友Mike通過郵件談?wù)摳髯缘膶W(xué)校生活。他知道你們學(xué)校組織了很多社會(huì)實(shí)踐活動(dòng)，他想了解你最難忘的一次社會(huì)實(shí)踐活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)Mike的問題，給他寫一封郵件，告訴他你去哪了，做了什么,以及你的感受。

提示詞語：visit, find something new, do experiments, happy, out of the books

Hi! Mike, I’m glad to hear from you. At my school we have a lot of social practice activities. I have an unforgettable experience. ______________________________ __________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ Anything interesting at your school? Yours, Wang Hui

Answer 1

【答案】

Hi! Mike,

I’m glad to hear from you. At my school we have a lot of social practice activities. I have an unforgettable experience. Last month I went to the Science Museum with my classmates. The Science Museum is a wonderful place for young people.

I visited the natural world and found something new. It was amazing. And I did a lot of physics experiments by myself. I learned a lot. I was pretty excited and happy.

In my opinion, learning in museums is a good way for us to learn something useful out of the books.

Anything interesting at your school?

Yours,

Wang Hui

【解析】

試題分析：這篇作文要求我們根據(jù)所給信息，給Mike寫一封郵件。題目中有關(guān)于郵件內(nèi)容的具體信息，我們應(yīng)用正確的英語將這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來。這些信息包括去哪了，干什么了以及感受如何。寫作時(shí)，我們可以根據(jù)需要將這些信息進(jìn)行重新整理和安排，使文章的意思銜接更自然。而且這些介紹學(xué)校生活及社會(huì)活動(dòng)所使用的詞匯和句型，是學(xué)生們比較熟悉的，所以將平時(shí)的積累發(fā)揮出來就可以。當(dāng)然我們要盡量使用一些好的句型和連詞，使文章上下文意思連貫，更出彩。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：這是一篇非常優(yōu)秀的作文，短文中作者按照題目的要求，給我們介紹了信件的內(nèi)容。結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，要點(diǎn)全面。而且作者在寫作時(shí)，將這些信息進(jìn)行了發(fā)揮，分段寫出去哪了，干什么了以及感受如何。條理分明。短文中的語言合乎英語的表達(dá)規(guī)范，而且作者還使用了一些較好的短語如something new，by myself，In my opinion等。另外還運(yùn)用了較好的句式如learning in museums is a good way for us to learn something useful out of the books.這個(gè)句子用到了動(dòng)名詞做主語及不定式做定語。