Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

生活中我們經(jīng)常會遇到各種困難，需要別人的幫助，同時我們也應(yīng)該幫助別人，大家相互幫助才能使我們的生活更加美好。請你以“I enjoy helping others.” 為話題寫一篇英語短文。

提示：1. Share your experience of helping others.

2. What’s your feeling about helping others?

要求：1. 短文內(nèi)容必須包含以上兩點，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；

2.詞數(shù)80左右。開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

In the world， everyone needs help. Meanwhile， we should help others. I like helping others.

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The world will be filled with pleasure if everyone gives a hand to others.

Answer 1

【答案】

In the world， everyone needs help. Meanwhile， we should help others. I like helping others.

I still remember my neighbor—an old grandma. She didn’t live with her children because of their busy work. One day she went downstairs， falling down by accident. She couldn’t move. I helped her to call 120 and stayed with her until she felt well. The old grandma thanked me for my help and she gave me a warm hug. From that time， I think helping others is a pleasant thing.

The world will be filled with pleasure if everyone gives a hand to others.

【解析】

試題分析：生活中我們經(jīng)常會遇到各種困難，需要別人的幫助，同時我們也應(yīng)該幫助別人，大家相互幫助才能使我們的生活更加美好。請你以“I enjoy helping others.” 為話題寫一篇英語短文，文中以第一人稱來寫。注意書信的稱呼和結(jié)束語，要把時間和安排交代清，注意一些固定搭配和詞組，考查了學(xué)生的綜合能力。

寫作亮點：這篇文章構(gòu)思新穎，內(nèi)容包括面很全，語言組織力很強，切中題意，文中出現(xiàn)了一些好的句型如：One day she went downstairs， falling down by accident. She couldn’t move.；.The old grandma thanked me for my help and she gave me a warm hug. 使文章的表達(dá)更豐富，更有邏輯性，更富有條理。