Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

分享是一種行為方式，也是一種良好的品質(zhì)（quality）， 人生處處充滿分享，懂得分享非常重要。分享快樂，快樂加倍；分擔(dān)煩惱，煩惱減半。

請(qǐng)根據(jù)以上觀點(diǎn)，結(jié)合思維導(dǎo)圖所示，以“My Sharing Experience”為題，寫一篇100詞左右的短文。

要求：1.短文須包括所有要點(diǎn)提示，語句通順，意思連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；

2.題目和開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；

3.文中不得出現(xiàn)個(gè)人真實(shí)姓名和校名。

參考詞匯：be full of, cut…in half, thanks to, overcome

My Sharing Experience

Sharing is a way of behavior as well as a good quality of people _____________________

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My Sharing Experience

Answer 1

【答案】My Sharing Experience

Sharing is a way of behavior as well as a good quality of people. Everyone has his experience of sharing. So do I. I often share my feelings with my mum. When I make progress or win a competition, I share my happiness with my mum. After seeing a big smile on her face, I get a sense of satisfaction. When I meet some troubles and feel depressed, I told my sadness to her. She always hugs me and comforts me. Her courageous words make me learn that love is always around me. It makes my heart full of warmth and strength. To sum up, sharing my feelings with mum is really a good way which drives my bad mood and brings me pleasure. As a saying goes, ‘Share your happiness, your happiness doubles; share your sorrow, your sorrow cuts to half.’

【解析】

本文屬于話題作文，描述分享的經(jīng)歷、意義以及感悟。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。

亮點(diǎn)說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語言表達(dá)符合英語習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致，特別適用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如so引導(dǎo)的倒裝句, share with, make progress, a sense of, make sb do, full of, to sum up以及諺語Share your happiness, your happiness doubles; share your sorrow, your sorrow cuts to half。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫。