Question

【題目】寫(xiě)作

現(xiàn)在全世界都在倡導(dǎo)“低碳生活（low-carbon life)”，即：降低二氧化碳的排放，采取低能量、低消耗、低開(kāi)支的生活方式。低碳生活對(duì)我們大家都有好處，請(qǐng)你寫(xiě)一篇短文向一家英文報(bào)社投稿。內(nèi)容包括：你的具體做法、你的感受以及建議。

提示詞語(yǔ)：be good for,everyone,ride a bike,think,make a difference,environment,suggest,reuse

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Answer 1

【答案】Low-carbon life is good for everyone.To help with the environment,I always walk or ride a bike to school instead of taking a car.Besides,I will try to use things that can be recycled and I never forget to turn off the lights when I leave the classroom.I think it's my duty to live a low-carbon life.And even the simplest activities can make a real difference to the environment.So I suggest we should reuse books as long as possible.And we'd better not spend much money on expensive

clothes.

If everyone does something for the environment,I believe the earth will be a better place

【解析】

本文屬于話題作文，針對(duì)“低碳生活”你的做法、感受以及建議。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。

亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語(yǔ)言表達(dá)符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如be good for, help with, instead of, besides, make a difference, as long as possible, had better do, it is my duty to。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫。