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【題目】為了讓學(xué)生吃到更加營養(yǎng)、安全的食品，政府出臺了陪餐制，要求從 4 月 1 日起，學(xué)校領(lǐng)導(dǎo)陪同學(xué)生用餐。請你根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)，給校報(bào)英語專欄寫一篇短文，談?wù)勛约旱目捶ā?/span>

1. 學(xué)生吃得健康、安全；

2. 及時(shí)發(fā)現(xiàn)就餐問題；

3. 食堂提供食品多樣；

4. 父母更加放心。

注意:1.詞數(shù) 80 詞左右；開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；

2. 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

3. 參考詞匯:規(guī)定 regulation (n.)；食堂 cafeteria (n.)；營養(yǎng)的 nutritious (adj.)

A new food safety regulation was put into use on April 1 to improve nutrition and food safety in schools. It asks the school managers to eat with students in their cafeterias.

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Answer 1

【答案】A new food safety regulation was put into use on April 1 to improve nutrition and food safety in schools. It asks the school managers to eat with students in their cafeterias.

Thanks to the regulation, something great has taken place in our school. First, we eat healthier and safer than before. Second, if there is any problem about food safety or other, our school leaders are able to know and solve it quickly. Also, the cafeteria workers are trying to provide different kinds of food for us. In other words, our parents needn’t worry about our diet any more.

We teenagers are still young and need to grow healthy, so I think the new regulation is really good and necessary. I hope it will be carried on forever.

【解析】

本文屬于材料作文，就政府出臺的“陪餐制度”談?wù)勀愕目捶�。根�?jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。

亮點(diǎn)說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語言表達(dá)符合英語習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如thanks to, take place, be able to, provide sth for sb, in other words, worry about, not...at all, carry on, first, second以及also，增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫。