Question

【題目】假定你是李平，最近收到意大利朋友Linda的電子郵件。以下是郵件的一部分，請(qǐng)你閱讀后回復(fù)，詞數(shù)80左右。

Subject:

From: Linda

To: Li Ping

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I’m really looking forward to meeting your brother when he comes to Rome in the summer. I can show him around the city! Please tell me something about him! How old is he? What does he look like? What kind of person is he and what’s he interested in?

Hope to hear from you soon.

Love,

Linda

Subject:

From: Li Ping

To: Linda

Dear Linda,

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Yours,

Li Ping

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Linda,

Thank you so much for agreeing to show my brother around Rome. Now let me tell you something about my brother. He is thirteen years old, easy-going and humorous-we get along really well. He loves different cultures. He is interested in museums and likes trying local food.

My brother is also cute. He’s of medium height with short straight black hair. He is good at Chinese kungfu, and usually wears T-shirts and jeans.

Thanks again for your help!

Yours,

Li Ping

【解析】

這篇作文要求我們對(duì)Linda的電子郵件進(jìn)行回復(fù)。寫作前，應(yīng)先閱讀Linda的來(lái)信，了解信中她想知道的事情，然后有針對(duì)性地給她進(jìn)行介紹。審題可知，Linda在信中提到她想要了解你哥哥的一些情況，她提出了三個(gè)問題，“他多大了”；“他是什么樣子的”；“他是怎樣的人以及他的興趣”，回信中應(yīng)對(duì)Linda的這些提問進(jìn)行回答，并根據(jù)表達(dá)的需要，補(bǔ)充一些細(xì)節(jié)內(nèi)容，使文章更加充實(shí)、豐富。短文應(yīng)使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)、第三人稱來(lái)敘述，注意謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞的正確形式。寫作時(shí)應(yīng)注意：首先內(nèi)容應(yīng)符合題目要求，并且敘述要注意層次和結(jié)構(gòu)；其次應(yīng)注意英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)問題，應(yīng)符合英文句式的特點(diǎn)以及表達(dá)習(xí)慣，不能寫漢語(yǔ)式的英語(yǔ)�？梢院�(jiǎn)單句結(jié)構(gòu)為主，穿插并列句、復(fù)合句以及其他復(fù)雜句式和結(jié)構(gòu)，提升作文檔次。同時(shí)語(yǔ)句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使文意連貫、自然。