Question

【題目】書面表達

人的一生中要做出許多次選擇。假設(shè)當初選擇初中學校時，你和父母意見相左。請根據(jù)以下要點，用英語寫一篇題為 “How I chose my school?” 的短文，描述這次選擇的經(jīng)過。詞數(shù)100---120。文中不得出現(xiàn)真實人名和學校名。

要點如下：

1. 描述這件事情的來龍去脈	① 你選擇A學校，理由是……； ② 你的父母選擇B學校，理由是……； ③ 你是怎么說服父母的？（比如：上網(wǎng)查資料，向親朋好友求助等等）
2. 你對此事的感想或體會	……

注意： 短文開頭已經(jīng)為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。

Though it was a long time ago, I still remember how I chose my junior middle school.

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Answer 1

【答案】

Though it was a long time ago, I still remember how I chose my junior middle school. My parents and I held different views upon which school I should go to. I preferred to choose School A, thinking it offers students many after-school activities. My parents, however, would like to send me to School B, which enjoys great fame but takes 4 hours to go there by train.

I tried every possible means to persuade my parents. After finding out more persuasive information online, I asked my uncle to have a heart-to-heart talk with my parents. And I was lucky to win their approval in the end.

Looking back, I never regret it. Once you set your mind on it, you should stick to it and never give up.

【解析】

試題分析：本篇作文叫小作者就怎樣選擇學校這一問題發(fā)表自己的觀點，小作者首先要認真閱讀前面的提示認真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時態(tài)。要求介紹。同時應選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。小作者還必須認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等。

寫作亮點：這篇短文不僅使用了大量的的短語，可見該生英語功底扎實。如I preferred to choose School A, thinking it offers students many after-school activities. My parents, however, would like to send me to School B, which enjoys great fame but takes 4 hours to go there by train. 等使文章的表達更豐富，更有邏輯性，更富有條理。