Question

【題目】（題文）假如你是李華，本周六與好友相約去北京植物園。你的美國網(wǎng)友Fred正好也在北京，你邀他同去。請你向他發(fā)出邀請，告訴他去哪兒，做什么以及你的建議。

提示詞語：Beijing Botanical Garden, have a picnic

提示問題：When and where are you going this Saturday?

What will you do there?

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What do you advise him to do?

Answer 1

【答案】I’m writing to invite you to join us this Saturday. This Saturday, I’m going to Beijing Botanical Garden with my friends. We’ll meet at our school gate at seven in the morning. Then we are going there by bike. We’ll enjoy the colorful flowers and plants there. We are going to have a picnic in the open air. If you like to join us, prepare some food to take with you. Don’t forget to take a bottle of water. I hope you can come and we’ll come back at five in the afternoon.

I’m looking forward to your early reply.

【解析】試題分析：書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運用所學(xué)英語知識準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。本題根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時，邀請對方并給出建議，需使用表達(dá)邀請和用于提建議的相關(guān)短語和句式，注意長短搭配，并在行文中增加細(xì)節(jié)和過渡，使文章讀起來比較流暢。動筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析提示要點，理解要點要表達(dá)的含義。平時除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累和寫作練習(xí)以外，還應(yīng)該適當(dāng)背誦一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。

亮點說明：這篇習(xí)作的層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達(dá)流暢。文中使用了非常好的短語，例如join us，this Saturday，be going to，Beijing Botanical Garden，in the morning，by bike，have a picnic，in the open air，like to do，forget to do，a bottle of water，come back，in the afternoon，look forward to等。而If you like to join us, prepare some food to take with you. / I hope you can come and we’ll come back at five in the afternoon.等多種從句和be going to結(jié)構(gòu)的運用，使本文內(nèi)容豐富，表達(dá)流暢，是本文的最大亮點。