Question

【題目】本卷完形填空A)最后指出：“Ifyouhavetalentandhardworkforyourdream,andyou’ll succeed.”你同意文中這個觀點嗎？對此觀點你有何看法？請根據(jù)下面的提示寫一篇英語短文談?wù)勀愕目捶?/span>,闡述理由,并舉例說明。

寫作要點:1.Youropinion (agreeordisagree...);

2.Reasons (clever,workhard;badmemory,askforhelp...);

3.Anexample (yourself/apersonaroundyou/afamousperson/...)

要求：1、短文應(yīng)包括所有的寫作要點，條理清楚,行文連貫，可適當發(fā)揮；

2、如舉自己或身邊的人作為例子，不能出現(xiàn)真實的人名或地名；

3、詞數(shù)不少于80個。

Answer 1

【答案】Possible Version One:

I agree with the opinion. Many famous persons have talents. And they work hard for their dreams. And they succeed at last.

My classmate Li Hai is very clever and he studies hard every day. He has a good memory and he remembers very quickly. He can write down what our teacher said in class. After class, he reviews what he has learnt in time. So he is always the first place on every exam in our class.

So let，s try our best to study hard and use rightly our abilities and talent. Work hard for our dreams.

Possible Version Two:

I disagree with it. We all know, not everyone who has telent can succeed. Only a very small number of people make it to the top.

My classmate Li Hai is not very clever, but he studies hard every day. He has a bad memory, so he has to remember things again and again. He has to write down what our teachershave said in class. And after class, he has to ask teachers or classmates for help again and reviewthem for a long time. But he can also get good grades on every exam, too.

So let's try our best to work hard for our dreams.

【解析】

1. 題干解讀

本文屬于觀點看法類作文，在寫作時應(yīng)注意三個方面：1. 你是否同意這個觀點；2. 你這樣認為的原因；3.舉例來支持你的觀點。

2. 例文點評

例文采用三段式；用第一人稱來表述自己的觀點；時態(tài)采用一般現(xiàn)在時，第一段點名自己的觀點，并進行了適當?shù)呢S富；第二段寫出了原因并且列舉了身邊的案例來對觀點進行舉例說明，極具說服力和感染力，最后一段呼應(yīng)開頭，首尾呼應(yīng)，敘述完整且條理清晰。

3. 高分亮點

短語：agree with, work hard, at last, write down, in time, disagree with, a very small number of, ask… for help, get good grades。

句型：let sb. do sth., try one’s best to do sth., 祈使句，定語從句。