Question

【題目】假設(shè)Jack班級即將在父親節(jié)前召開以“感恩父親”為主題的班會，要求大家寫一篇演講稿介紹自己的父親，并向父親表達感恩之情。請結(jié)合Jack列出的提綱，為他寫一篇演講稿。

1. 我的父親40幾歲，總是面帶微笑；

2. 他是公司總經(jīng)理，整天跟數(shù)字打交道，工作力爭高標準；

3. 每當(dāng)我灰心泄氣時總是為我打氣，也為我的小小進步感到驕傲；

4. 他對我影響最大，有一次……

5. 我很敬佩我的父親，我要向他學(xué)習(xí)，長大后實現(xiàn)自己的夢想。

要求：1. 文章需包括所有提示內(nèi)容，要求句子通順，語意連貫。

2. 第4要點請發(fā)揮至少2—3句，表現(xiàn)父親對我的影響。

3. 作文不少于100詞。開頭與結(jié)尾不計入總詞數(shù)

In my life, there is always someone right here for me. That man is my father. Today I want to introduce the great man to you and say thank you to him.

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Answer 1

【答案】例文

In my life, there is always someone right here for me. That man is my father. Today I want to introduce the great man to you and say thank you to him.

My father is in his forties. He always wears a smile on his face. He is the general manager of his company. He works with numbers every day and works to high standards all the time. He cheer me up every time I lose heart. What’s more, he feels proud of my little progress, He influences me most. He often donates money to charity and helps homeless people. He is famous for his kindness. I admire my father very much. I want to learn from him and realize my dream when grow up.

【解析】

本篇為材料作文，要求按照提示完成一篇感恩父親的短文，短文要求介紹父親的概況以及父親給自己帶來的影響，并表達對父親的感恩之情。要求短文要包含提示的所有信息，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，語言連貫，邏輯清晰。

1.題干解讀：本篇材料作文要求以Jack的身份，用第一人稱、一般現(xiàn)在時介紹父親的概況以及父親給自己帶來的影響，表達對父親的感恩之情。書寫時要注意用全所給材料，文句通順，內(nèi)容完整。