Question

【題目】書(shū)面表達(dá)

升入新學(xué)年,九年級(jí)二班迎來(lái)了新英語(yǔ)教師,她的課很有特色。李明和班里其他一些原本不喜歡上英語(yǔ)課的同學(xué),現(xiàn)在有了很大的變化,他們的英語(yǔ)水平也明顯提高了。假如你是校英語(yǔ)報(bào)的小記者,請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面的提示內(nèi)容,寫(xiě)一篇短文,介紹李明及班里其他同學(xué)的變化。

注意:1. 70詞左右。

2. 開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Last term

In class only listened and took notes; had little interest discuss things with others;

After class did lots of homework

This term

ask and solve problems by themselves; take more interest; work hard to improve their English. to do less homework; read English magazines and storybooks; join the Happy English club at school

Great Changes in the English Class

This term, great changes have taken place in Class Two, Grade Nine since the new English teacher, Mrs Yang, came.

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In short, they are doing better than before and they are enjoying themselves at school now.

Answer 1

【答案】This term, great changes have taken place in Class Two, Grade Nine since the new English teacher, Mrs Yang, came. Li Ming and his classmates didn’t use to like English, but now they’re interested in it. They used to only listen to teachers and take notes in class. Now, they discuss things with others and ask and solve problems by themselves. They all work hard to improve their English. They used to have lots of homework to do, but now they have less homework, and they have more time to read English magazines and novels. They have also joined the Happy English club at school. In short, they are doing better than before and they are enjoying themselves at school now.

【解析】

這是一篇給材料作文，介紹李明及班里其他同學(xué)的變化。

結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過(guò)去時(shí)，人稱為第三人稱，注意主謂一致問(wèn)題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見(jiàn)句式的應(yīng)用，比如：They used to……，Now, they discuss……，They all work hard to……，but now they have……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫(xiě)作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫(xiě)作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。