Question

【題目】暑假快到了，同學(xué)們都在議論著假期的計劃。請根據(jù)下面的提示，用英語寫一篇短文，介紹幾位同學(xué)和你自己的想法。

注意：1.詞數(shù)80字左右（文章開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）；

2.不得透露學(xué)校、姓名等任何個人信息，否則不予評分。

Many of my classmates are discussing the summer vocation plans. Anna

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Answer 1

【答案】The summer holiday is coming. Our class have had a discussion about what to do during the holiday. Some are in favor of staying at home. Anna want to do voluntary work for the old. She would like to make new friends.Peter thinks it is better to travel in order to relax himself and learn about culture there.However, he will spend more money and meet some difficulties while traveling.Kelly would like to visit his grandma in the hometown.He also wants to cook himself.

In my opinion, it would be much better to stay at home for I can do what I like, such as reading books, watching TV, and helping my parents with the housework.

【解析】這篇習(xí)作的層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達(dá)流暢。文中使用了非常好的短語，例如have a discussion，what to do，during the holiday，in favor of，would like to do，in order to，In my opinion，stay at home，such as等。而Peter thinks it is better to travel in order to relax himself and learn about culture there./ In my opinion, it would be much better to stay at home for I can do what I like / I will be happy if I can be a member of your club.等多種從句結(jié)構(gòu)的運用更是為文章增色不少。