Question

【題目】 書面表達

在你的成長過程中,許多人、許多事物一直在陪伴著你、支持著你、溫暖著你,讓你感動、伴你成長。請以“Say thanks to________”為題,寫一篇短文。

要求: 1. 寫出要感謝的對象、原因及感激語言；

2.語言表達準確,語意通順、連貫;

3.詞數(shù)70左右,書寫工整、規(guī)范;

4.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名、校名和地名。

Say thanks to my teachers

How time flies! My junior high school lives will come to end.

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Answer 1

【答案】Say thanks to my teachers

How time flies! My junior high school lives will come to end.

In the past three years, I have studied in a beautiful school which provides me with a good study place. Teachers in my school also give me lots of help. Whenever I was in trouble, you always stood around me to comfort me .You taught me how to be a good person and gave me the courage to face difficulties. You are my friends. So I want to say, I love you, my dear teachers. I have grown up happily with your help. I hope you will be happy and healthy forever.

【解析】 話題作文寫出的句子要達意，完整，語法正確，合乎習(xí)慣，特別是句式，謂語動詞形式要有根有據(jù)，選用比較有把握的詞匯，用恰當?shù)木湫蛯懗龃_切反映內(nèi)容要求的句子。英語作文要注意人稱和時態(tài)，注意提供的觀點、材料，要注意句子的完整性，謂語動詞的正確形式，句子之間的銜接和過渡。英語作文，要忠實于材料，不必擴展，注意用好連詞，多用非謂語，慎用較難的句型，一定不能寫錯句。