Question

【題目】在我們的一生中會遇見很多的人和事�？傆心莻�人或那件事情讓懵懂的你有了改變。每一個人物都給我們不小的震動，每一段故事都留給我們深刻的印象�；叵肽侨艘苍S是在你處于困境時及時伸出援助之手，也許是在你需要幫助時給你的無私的愛，或者鼓勵你面對困難時努力不懈地奮斗。請補全 “__________ changed me a lot” 的題目，寫一篇80個詞的短文，記述一件難忘的事給你帶來的改變。

要求：1. 字數(shù)不少于80。

2. 語言通暢、書寫規(guī)范、字跡清晰工整、卷面整潔、格式規(guī)范。文中不得使用真實姓名、校名，否則以零分計。

__________ changed me a lot

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Answer 1

【答案】范文

My father changed me a lot

My father changed me a lot. He is not a teacher but he taught me a lot of life lessons.

In the past, I always wanted to give up when the things was difficult for me to finish. One day my father took me to the Great Wall. I was too tired to climb to the top of the Great Wall. So I just wanted to give up in the halfway. But my father encouraged me and said “A few difficulties will not discourage us. If you get to the top, you will be amazed at how beautiful the view will be.” Finally, I managed to get to the top and enjoyed the beautiful sceneries.

From then on, I started to try my best to keep on doing anything instead of giving it up in the halfway.

【解析】

1.題干解讀：該題屬于話題作文，學生應該先補全作文題目再進行寫作。該話題內(nèi)容多涉及過去的一些經(jīng)歷，全文主要時態(tài)應用一般過去時。