Question

【題目】書面表達

假如你是Dave， 昨天你收到了你的好朋友Jim的郵件, Jim 在郵件中向你傾訴了他的煩惱：

1.父母不了解自己，并且偷看自己的日記，于是他同父母吵架；

2.自己喜歡踢足球，但是花費時間太多，以至于成績下降，感覺非�？鄲�；

3.晚上熬夜寫作業(yè)，第二天早上上課非常困。

請你根據(jù)Jim在郵件中提及的問題，回復(fù)一封郵件給他提一些建議。

注意;開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。詞數(shù)：90詞左右

Dear Jim,

I’m glad to hear from you and I’m sorry to hear that you’re in trouble with your parents and study.

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Good luck!

Yours

Dave

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Jim,

I’m sorry to hear from you and I’m sorry to hear that you are in trouble with your parents and study. As your best friend, I’d like to give you some advice. First, I think you’d better talk more with your parents about your life and feelings. The reason why they read your diaries just may be that they want to know more about you. If you talk with them, they won’t worry about you. Then, make sure that you play football properly. Don't spend too much time on it, or you’ll have less energy to study. Last, why not do your homework as soon as you get home after school and go to bed before nine? I hope what I say can help you.

【解析】

這篇作文關(guān)于昨天你收到了你的好朋友Jim的郵件, Jim 在郵件中向你傾訴了他的煩惱我們，要求根據(jù)他的來信內(nèi)容寫一封回信，首先應(yīng)注意在短文中要包括題目中給出的所有信息，不能遺漏要點，并注意表達的層次和條理。其次要注意使用正確的時態(tài)和人稱，通過分析可知，這篇短文應(yīng)使用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，謂語動詞用原形，特別要注意如果主語是第三人稱單數(shù)的時候，謂語動詞形式要變化，這是一個寫作的難點。最后要注意英語的表達習(xí)慣，英語句式與漢語在語序和詞性上的使用是不同的，要注意不能逐詞翻譯，寫漢語式的英語。應(yīng)從句子整體考慮，使用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~匯和句型來表達，語法規(guī)范。還應(yīng)使用一些較好的句型或者短語，增強文章的表現(xiàn)力。