Question

【題目】榜樣的力量是無窮的。在我們身邊有許許多多的榜樣，勤勞的工人伯伯，辛勤的老師，熱情的同學(xué)，慈愛的父母......。某英文網(wǎng)站正在開展以“我身邊的榜樣”為主題的征文活動(dòng)。假如你是李華，請用英語寫一篇短文投稿，談?wù)勀闵磉叺陌駱邮钦l，他（她）具有什么樣的品質(zhì)，你從他（她）身上學(xué)到了什么。

提示詞語：kind, helpful, warm-hearted ,hard-working, set a good example

提示問題：

Who is your role model?

What traits(品質(zhì)）does your role model have? Please give one or two examples.

What have you learned from him/her?

Everyone has a role model. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Answer 1

【答案】1. My role model is my classmate Jack. He is very kind and helpful.

At school, he studies so hard that he often gets good grades in exams. However, I am not good at studying, so he not only helps me with my homework about every subject but also tells me to work hard in order that I can catch up with others. With his help, I have made great progress in my study and I thank him very much.

I think I’m lucky to have such a good classmate. From now on, I’ll try my best to study better and better. And I hope I’ll learn from Jack to help others in trouble.

2. My role model is my friend Liu Xuan. She is good at English and she studies very hard. She is also very kind and helpful.

Once, our group had some difficulties in preparing the English play. Liu Xuan was not our group member but she helped us to practice. She gave us many useful suggestions. At last, our group won. We thanked her but she said we won because of the teamwork.

I learn I should not only try my best to do things well but also help others when they need. I want to follow her example.

3. Everyone has a role model. My role model is my mother. I have learned a lot from her.

My mother is kind and helpful. She always reaches out her warm hands to the people who need help. Once, our neighbour, an old granny was ill. Her children were not at home. Then my mother sent her to the hospital with her car. She is also kind to my grandparents. She cooks delicious food for them and takes good care of them when they are ill. My mother is also hard-working at work. She goes to work early and comes back late and she can co-operate with her workmates well. She has won the heart of them.

My mother sets a good example for me. What she has done inspires me and I decide to be a person like her.

【解析】

這是一篇話題作文。話題是“我身邊的榜樣”，也是寫人的作文。結(jié)合所給材料可知本文人稱主要是第三人稱，時(shí)態(tài)是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。認(rèn)真閱讀提示，審清主題，根據(jù)提示（Who is your role model?What traits(品質(zhì)）does your role model have? Please give one or two examples.What have you learned from him/her?），列出本文的寫作提綱。寫作中可適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意表達(dá)順序，表達(dá)要有條理性，語句通順，意思連貫，要符合邏輯關(guān)系，字?jǐn)?shù)要在100詞左右，不要寫的太少。寫完以后，注意再讀一遍，看看有無拼寫、語法錯(cuò)誤（時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致等）。本文提綱：（作文1）我的榜樣是我的同學(xué)杰克。他非常善良，樂于助人。在學(xué)校，他學(xué)習(xí)很努力，經(jīng)常在考試中取得好成績。但是，我不擅長學(xué)習(xí)，所以他不僅幫我做每一個(gè)科目的作業(yè)，而且告訴我要努力學(xué)習(xí)，以便趕上別人。在他的幫助下，我的學(xué)習(xí)取得了很大的進(jìn)步，我非常感謝他。我想我很幸運(yùn)有這么好的同學(xué)。從現(xiàn)在起，我會(huì)盡我最大的努力學(xué)習(xí)。希望我能向杰克學(xué)習(xí)，幫助有困難的人。

（作文2）我的榜樣是我的朋友劉璇。她英語很好，學(xué)習(xí)很努力。她也很善良，樂于助人。

有一次，我們小組在準(zhǔn)備英語劇時(shí)遇到了一些困難。劉璇不是我們組的成員，但她幫助我們練習(xí)。她給了我們很多有用的建議。最后，我們隊(duì)贏了。我們感謝她，但她說我們是因?yàn)閳F(tuán)隊(duì)合作才贏的。我知道我不僅要盡力做好事情，而且要在別人需要的時(shí)候幫助他們。我想向她學(xué)習(xí)。

（作文3）每個(gè)人都有榜樣。我的榜樣是我的母親。我從她那里學(xué)到了很多。

我母親很善良，樂于助人。她總是向需要幫助的人伸出溫暖的手。有一次，我們的鄰居，一位老奶奶病了。她的孩子不在家。后來我媽媽開車把她送到醫(yī)院。 她對我的祖父母也很好。她為他們做美味的食物，生病時(shí)照顧他們。我母親工作也很努力。她早出晚歸，能很好地與同事合作。她贏得了他們的心。

我媽媽給我樹立了一個(gè)好榜樣。她所做的事激勵(lì)了我，我決定做一個(gè)像她一樣的人。