Question

【題目】書(shū)面表達(dá)

假如你是張鵬，轉(zhuǎn)學(xué)去了杭州。你的好友王新來(lái)信詢問(wèn)你的近況，并告訴你他暑假來(lái)看你。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示，給王新寫(xiě)一封回信。

寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)：

1.表達(dá)你收到他來(lái)信之后的激動(dòng)心情。

2.介紹新學(xué)校。

(1)設(shè)施：一個(gè)大操場(chǎng)，一個(gè)圖書(shū)館。

(2)師生：友善，易于相處。

3.針對(duì)他如何與同學(xué)們?nèi)谇⑾嗵幪岢鼍唧w建議。

寫(xiě)作要求：

(1)不得使用真實(shí)的姓名和學(xué)校名

(2)課適當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié)，使內(nèi)容充實(shí)，行文連貫。

(3)字跡工整，語(yǔ)言精練，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，條理清晰。

(4)至少80詞。

Dear Wang Xin,

How are you doing? ___________________________________________________

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Yours,

Zhang Peng

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Wang Xin,

How are you doing? Thank you for your letter. I am very glad to know you will come to see me in the coming summer holiday.

Now I tell you something about my new school. I have been in this school since I came here

last year. My new school is big and beautiful, there is a big playground and library in it. I like playing football and reading books. I often play football on the playground with my classmates after school. The teachers and students are very friendly, they often help me. Now I am getting on well with them.

If you want to get along with your classmates, make sure that you care about them. You can also communicate well with them to perfectly get along with your classmates. I am looking forward to seeing you soon.

Yours,

Zhang Peng

【解析】

此作文要求寫(xiě)一封信文。動(dòng)筆前應(yīng)先認(rèn)真閱讀材料，圍繞所給材料組織內(nèi)容，確定主要短語(yǔ)，句式等問(wèn)題。通過(guò)閱讀材料可知這篇作文主要使用的人稱就是第一人稱，時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，題中包含了這些要點(diǎn)：①表達(dá)你收到他來(lái)信之后的激動(dòng)心情。②介紹新學(xué)校；③針對(duì)他如何與同學(xué)們?nèi)谇⑾嗵幪岢鼍唧w建議。寫(xiě)作時(shí)，避免使用漢語(yǔ)式的英語(yǔ)，盡量使用我們熟悉的句子或短語(yǔ)。語(yǔ)法要正確，表達(dá)要符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣，注意時(shí)態(tài)、時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)的搭配及主謂一致問(wèn)題。寫(xiě)作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系，表達(dá)具有條理性。

【高分句型一】

I have been in this school since I came here last year. 自從去年我到這以來(lái)一直在這所學(xué)校。這是一個(gè)現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)的句子，since后引導(dǎo)的句子要用一般過(guò)去時(shí)。

【高分句型二】

If you want to get along with your classmates, make sure that you care about them. 如果你想和你的同學(xué)相處，一定要關(guān)心他們。句子If you want to get along with your classmates 是一個(gè)由if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語(yǔ)從句。