Question

【題目】書面表達

假如你是Tom，本周六是你的15歲生日，請你寫一封信邀請你的朋友Mike來參加生日聚會，詞數(shù)60—80，信的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

內(nèi)容要點：

1．時間是本周六，晚上六點半；

2．請Mike幫忙設(shè)計一些好玩且有意義的游戲；

3．準(zhǔn)備一些食物和飲料，別帶垃圾食品；

4．可以帶上他的朋友一起參加生日聚會；

5．自由發(fā)揮一至兩點內(nèi)容。

要求： 1.詞數(shù)60--80，信的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

2.不要逐條翻譯，內(nèi)容要連貫。

參考詞匯：① design – 設(shè)計 /?? ② meaningful – 有意義的 /?? ③ junk food – 垃圾食品

Dear Mike,

I’d like to invite you to come to my birthday party. ___________________________________

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Yours，Tom

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Mike,

I’d like to invite you to come to my birthday party. My birthday party is at half past six this Saturday. Can you think of some interesting, exciting and meaningful games? In this way, we can have a good time during the party. I would like you to bring some food and drinks. Remember not to bring junk food. You can also bring some of your friends to the party if you like. The more people come, the happier we will be. I’m looking forward to seeing you at the party.

Yours, Tom

【解析】試題分析：本篇書面表達是一封書信，結(jié)合本題所給的寫作信息，邀請朋友參加“你”的生日聚會。根據(jù)內(nèi)容提示可知本文應(yīng)運用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意連詞、固定短語的交替使用，使文意連接緊密，還要注意使用豐富的語句，注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系，最后最好要表達出自己的感想和看法。

寫作亮點：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。文中了think of，in this way ,have a good time，would like, look forward to等詞組恰當(dāng)使用，使上下文意連接緊密；文中恰當(dāng)?shù)厥褂昧?/span> “the+比較級+句子，the+比較級+句子” 句型，還使用了條件狀語從句和祈使句，使文章增色不少，值得學(xué)習(xí)。