Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

假如你是小玲，上周日，你和你的美國朋友Betty在西山公園玩得很開心�，F(xiàn)在請你根據(jù)下列表格的信息，議“A Happy Day”為題寫一篇英語短文。

Time	Things
In the morning	climb the mountain see beautiful flowers and monkeys
At noon	have a picnic on the grassland listen to music
In the afternoon	go boating on the lake feed fish

（寫作要求）

1. 文中應(yīng)包括以上信息，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，行文連貫，書寫規(guī)范。

2. 文章字?jǐn)?shù)在70詞左右。開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

3. 文中不得出現(xiàn)涉及考生真實(shí)信息的人名、地名或校名等。

A Happy Day

Last Sunday, Betty and I had a very good time in Xishan Park.

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Answer 1

【答案】A Happy Day

Last Sunday, Betty and I had a very good time in Xishan Park. In the morning, we got up early to catch the bus to Xishan Park. We climbed the mountain, laughing and singing. On the way up to the top, we saw lots of beautiful flowers and lovely monkeys. When we got back to the foot of the mountain, it was time to have lunch. So we had a picnic on the grassland. After that, we listened to music, feeling relaxed. In the afternoon, we went boating on the lake and fed fishes. When we got home, both of us felt tired but happy.

【解析】

這篇短文使用了不少的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少，如have a good time、in the morning、catch the bus、climb the mountain、on the way up to the top、the foot of the mountain、have lunch、had a picnic、after that、listen to music、go boating on the lake、both of us等。而非謂語動(dòng)詞結(jié)構(gòu)“We climbed the mountain, laughing and singing./ it was time to have lunch.”和“When we got back to the foot of the mountain, it was time to have lunch./ When we got home, both of us felt tired but happy.”等時(shí)間狀語從句的運(yùn)用，豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣化，是本文的亮點(diǎn)。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章表達(dá)更有邏輯性，也更富有條理。