Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

最近你的朋友Tom在他的微博上發(fā)了這樣一個帖子：

These days, I feel my life is full of problems. I have so many rules in my home and school. I often argue with my parents about my hairstyle and my clothes. I failed my English exams last week. Every day the teachers say the same thing to us: Study hard and try to enter a better high school.

I want to make my school life easier and more colorful. What should I do?

These days, I feel my life is full of problems. I have so many rules in my home and school. I often argue with my parents about my hairstyle and my clothes. I failed my English exams last week. Every day the teachers say the same thing to us: Study hard and try to enter a better high school.

I want to make my school life easier and more colorful. What should I do?

假如你是Jim，請你給Tom回個帖子。根據(jù)中文大意和英文提示，寫出意思連貫，符合邏輯，不少于80詞的短文。請不要寫出你真實的校名和姓名。內(nèi)容要求：

1. 針對Tom的幾點困惑，先談?wù)勀愕目捶ǎ?/span>

2. 為他提幾條合理的建議；

Hi Tom,

How are you? I saw your problems in your weibo. I can understand you very well.

I hope my advice will help you, and you can enjoy your school life better.

Love,

Jim

Answer 1

【答案】Hi Tom,

How are you? I saw your problems in your weibo. I can understand you very well.

Actually, I don’t mind the rules. They help us to be a better person. I think you have to understand them. I believe that it is not good to argue with our parents. But we should talk with them and try to make them know us well.

As for English, you should try to listen to your teacher carefully. You can do more listening and reading. Keeping diaries also helps your English writing.

I think what the teachers said is right. Only have we got enough knowledge we can serve for the society and have a good life in the future.

To make your life colorful, you can do some sports after class or join some clubs. I think they will bring you happiness.

I hope my advice will help you, and you can enjoy your school life better.

Love,

Jim

【解析】

這是一篇給材料作文，針對Tom的幾點困惑，先談?wù)勎业目捶�；為他提幾條合理的建議。

結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，人稱為單數(shù)第一，二人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：I think……，I believe that……，you should……，You can……，I hope……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。