Question

【題目】書面表達

為配合我市開展“創(chuàng)建文明城市（build a civilized city）”活動，作為中學生，我們應該為創(chuàng)建文明城市做點什么？請你根據下列英文提示，用英語寫一篇70詞左右的英語短文。開頭已經寫出，詞數不計入總詞數。

1. respect (尊敬)the teachers and the old; be polite and honest

2. obey the traffic rules; cross the street politely

3. protect the environment; don’t spit(吐痰）everywhere or throw rubbish around

4. save resources; eat up all the food on the plate

Answer 1

【答案】In order to cooperate with the activities of "building a civilized city" in our city, As middle school students, what should we do for it？First, we should respect the teachers and the old. Also, it's important for us to be polite and honest to other people. Second, we should obey the traffic rules and cross the street politely. We can only cross the road when the traffic light is green. Third, we must protect the environment. Don't spit everywhere or throw rubbish around. Fourth, the resources are getting fewer and fewer, so we should save resources. Especially, don't waste water or food. When we have dinner, it's best for us to eat up all the food.

【解析】

這是一篇材料作文，內容是，我市開展“創(chuàng)建文明城市（build a civilized city）”活動，根據材料中的相關信息介紹一下作為中學生，我們應該為創(chuàng)建文明城市做點什么？主要從尊敬老師和老人、彬彬有禮、遵守交通規(guī)則、保護環(huán)境、節(jié)約資源等幾個方面去寫。時態(tài)為一般現在時，人稱為第一人稱。注意發(fā)作文中必須包含材料上的所有信息，并適當發(fā)揮。寫作時，避免使用漢語式的英語，盡量使用我們熟悉的句子或短語。語法要正確，表達要符合英語習慣，注意時態(tài)、時間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題。寫作中適當使用連詞，注意上下文聯系緊密，符合邏輯關系，表達具有條理性。

【高分句型一】

Also it's important for us to be polite and honest to other people．我們禮貌誠信待人也是很重要的。

it is+adj+for sb+to do sth對某人來說做某事是怎么樣的，it是形式主語，動詞不定式做真正主語。

【高分句型二】

We can only cross the road when the traffic light is green, 我們只能在綠燈的時候過馬路。

when引導的時間狀語從句。