Question

【題目】書面表達。

請根據(jù)下列表格的提示, 寫一篇題為Changes in My Hometown的短文。（80詞左右）

內(nèi)容要點:

過去	現(xiàn)在
1.舊房	1.高樓
2.河水骯臟	2.河水清澈
3.步行、騎自行車上班	3.乘公交車、小汽車上班
4.道路狹窄	4.環(huán)形路寬闊
5.居住條件差	5.居住環(huán)境舒適

Changes in My Hometown

Answer 1

【答案】Changes in My Hometown

In the past ten years, great changes have taken place in my hometown. In the past, there used to be old houses. The river was very dirty. The roads were narrow and the living conditions were hard. People went to work on foot or by bike. But now, there are many tall buildings in my hometown. The river is clean and the water is clear. There are many ring roads and the living conditions are comfortable. People usually go to work by bus or by car.

I am glad to see these great changes in my hometown. I think my hometown will be much more beautiful in the future.

【解析】

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